The Best Way to Prevent Suicide in Universities We sometimes hear the sad news of suicide in universities. Is there any way

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问题     The Best Way to Prevent Suicide in Universities
    We sometimes hear the sad news of suicide in universities. Is there any way to prevent this from happening again? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Best Way to Prevent Suicide in Universities
    You are to write in three parts:
    In the first part, state what you think is the best way. In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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答案 The Best Way to Prevent Suicide in Universities Due to the increasing pressure from the society, parents, teachers and peers, a larger number of university students are feeling depressed. Some of them even go to extreme and end their lives. To resolve this issue, I think the best way is to involve students in the community service. The benefits of the involvement are two-fold. First of all, students can make some friends in the process of serving the community. Usually, community services include visiting seniors’ home, helping those in need, and so on. Through different kinds of activities, students can make lots of friends with various backgrounds. When issues arise, these friends will shed different lights on the issues. Solutions could be found from a broadened and enlightened perspective. Secondly, by serving the community, sense of achievement will be established among university students. Usually, university students commit suicide simply for the reason that they do not think they are worthy enough to live on. If they are committed to the community service, they could see the difference they have made and find out the meaning of life. In conclusion, university students are encouraged to contribute to the local community. By doing so, they can find more friends and gain a meaningful purpose of life.

解析     本题属于“问题解决型”作文,涉及的题材是“社会热点”。该题要求考生对“防止大学生自杀的最佳途径”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:由学生所承受的压力入题,指出最好的办法是让学生投入到社区服务中。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.在社区服务过程中,学生可以结交一些朋友。当我们有困难时,这些朋友能从多角度为我们分忧。
    2.社区服务能使在校大学生建立起成就感,找回生命的意义。
    结尾:鼓励大学生服务当地社区是有益的。
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