Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following drawing: You are to write in three parts. In the

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问题 Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following drawing:

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Garbage of the Scenic Spot As is vividly shown in the picture, a scenic spot, compared to a human, is carrying such a big litter bag that he can’t hold on anymore. What the picture depicts reflects the litter burden of scenic spots. The increasing tourists coming for scenic spots bring development and prosperity for the local economy, but at the same time, they bring a big amount of garbage too. What’s worse, they throw their litter away wherever they go. Some of the litter is hidden in tree branches or crevices of valleys. As a consequence, litter is everywhere, which is beyond the acceptance of the spots. If this situation goes on, scenic spots will be covered with white garbage. And finally it will lead to the decrease of the tourists. Nevertheless, each of us can take actions to change this situation. First, we should call every tourist to take the garbage out of the scenery spot and form a good traveling habit. Then, we can reduce garbage by leading a "low-carbon tourism", such as drinking less bottling water and using less disposable products. Only by doing these can we lighten the burden of scenic spots and keep their beauty.

解析     本题为提纲图画式作文。此图画使用了拟人手法,给一座山添上了四肢和表情。因此,我们不仅要读懂图中的文字,还要领会山痛苦表情下的含义。从文体上来看,本题要求写一篇议论文。
    这幅图画描述起来比较简单,画中有一座拟人化的山,代表某景区,正抱着一个大包袱,包袱上写着“旅游垃圾”,这反映了当前旅游景区参观人数过多、游客乱扔垃圾以及由此造成的景区负担过重的现象。但是如果继续挖掘,由此引发的深层思考应该是:我们应该怎样面对和处理这一问题?一方面,景区应该在路边多设置垃圾桶,为游人扔垃圾创造方便,并做到及时清理。另一方面,作为游客,我们既要遵守不随地乱扔垃圾的规定,还要尽量做到低碳旅游:尽量少用一次性塑料袋、少喝瓶装水等。进一步发挥的话,考生还可以联想到,如果人人都做到低碳旅游,那么我们的景区将变得越来越美丽。
    按照题目给出的提纲,第一段需要对图画内容进行简要描述,以描写为主;第二段需要揭示图画的深刻内涵,最好将说明和议论结合起来展开论述;第三段要求给出个人的评价,对全文进行总结即可,以议论为主。
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