Write a composition on the topic: Deepen China’s Reform on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 现在的改革成果为进一步深化改革奠定了基础。

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问题     Write a composition on the topic: Deepen China’s Reform on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
    1. 现在的改革成果为进一步深化改革奠定了基础。
    2. 然而改革的道路并不平坦。
    3. 建议我们要…
    You should write about 160-200 words neatly.

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答案 Deepen China’s Reform The achievements of China’s reform have established a firm foundation for deepening reform. Politically, China has adopted the principle of "governing the country according to law". China’s economy is vitalized, and people’s living conditions have been improved. Moreover, China enjoys a stable political environment and makes rapid progress in economic construction. However, the road of deepening reform is uneven. To begin with, further reform means overcoming rooted defects in our political structure and changing unreasonable factors in economic structure, so it will run up against all kinds of resistances and differences. Besides some old perceptions and conventional ideology are still influential. And not all people welcomes further reform. To strengthen our country we must continue making our efforts to deepen reform. The depth of reform, to some extent, determines the future development of our country. Therefore, we ought to take full advantage of the best development period, adhere to opening-up policy and accelerate the speed of reform so as to attain our goals.

解析     这是篇分析建议类议论文,即通过对某种现象或问题等进行深入分析,找出其形成的原因或产生的后果,最后得出结论的一种写作方法。根据提纲,作文可采用三段式行文,文中所给的提纲可确立为各段的主题句,但第三段的主题句还需具体化。文章开篇提出现有的改革开放的成果已为我们深化改革奠定了基础。随后进一步论述改革开放取得的具体成果。接着可用 However,承上启下,完成段落的过渡,指出深化改革的道路并不平坦。我们必定会遇到重重阻力。最后,文章应强调,要增强我们的国力就要深化改革,因为深化改革将决定国家的未来。我们必须抓住机遇、深化改革、加快改革的步伐以最终实现改革开放的宏伟目标。
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