Suppose you are a new graduate student of a university. Three months after you arrive at the school, you write to the president

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问题 Suppose you are a new graduate student of a university. Three months after you arrive at the school, you write to the president making suggestions about how to improve the university. In your letter you should:
1) show your understanding of the situation of the university.
2) put forward your ways of improvement.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead.
Do not write the address.

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答案Dear President, I am a new graduate student and I am writing this letter to express my deepest concern about the construction of our university. Though a multitude of achievements have been made by the university, still there are some areas to he improved. Firstly, we should place more emphasis on academic research rather than making profits. In addition, more effective measures should be taken to advance the teaching quality, such as recruiting distinguished professors and instituting stricter assessment rules for the professors, finally, with the development of science and technology, better leaching facilities and studying environment are required for the university. Thanks a lot for your due attention to this letter. I genuinely expect to see some changes in our university as soon as possible. Yours truly, Zhang Wei

解析 第一段开门见山,由一句话组成,该句前半部分为自我介绍,后半部分表明写作目的——表示对“大学建设”的关注。第二段共四句。首句使用转折连词though,含蓄指出学校的不足(虽取得很大成就,但依然有地方要改善),完成命题指令1)。第二句到第四句是作者的三条具体建议(firstly,in addition,finally),层次十分清晰,完成命题指令2)。第三段共两句。首句感谢关注,第二句表示有所期待。这两句都属于建议信的经典结尾句型。
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