Recently, a poll on university students’ self-discipline shows that only 30 percent of the surveyed students have very good self

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问题     Recently, a poll on university students’ self-discipline shows that only 30 percent of the surveyed students have very good self-control and more than half of them are rated very low in self-discipline.
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                How to Develop College Students’ Self-discipline?
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 How to Develop College Students’ Self-discipline? Many university students are not capable of controlling themselves. They spend too much time playing and entertaining, so they waste a lot of precious time and energy on things that have nothing to do with their studies. Self-discipline is very important for students’ future development and it will be better developed with the joint efforts of parents, schools and students themselves. Firstly, parents should set a good example for their children in their daily life. We often say that parents are the children’s first teachers, because what parents say and how they behave will definitely exert a great impact on their kids. If parents ask a child to do his homework while they themselves are playing games or watching TV, do you think it will be easy for a child to concentrate on his study under such circumstances? If parents schedule their time properly without wasting time on something meaningless, it will surely exert a positive influence on the development of children’s self-discipline. Secondly, it is of equal importance for universities to focus their attention on fostering students’ self-discipline. The university life is a crucial period for the development of students’ world view. After a stressful high school life, these students begin to develop their self-consciousness and self-worth. So it is really necessary for universities to create a strict but humane environment for students’ self-development. Only when students are mobilized by their own wills can they bring their initiative into full play. In sum, to develop university students’ self-discipline, the guidance of parents and universities is necessary. Moreover, God only helps those who help themselves. Students themselves should make an effort to develop self-discipline. This good quality of self-discipline can help university students shape favorable characteristics and build strong wills. Without a strong will, they may end up wasting time on worthless things.

解析     本题要求就如何培养大学生的自律性发表个人见解。考生可以从家庭和学校两个方面展开论述,说明如何培养大学生的自律性,最后强调树立自律意识的重要性。
    开头部分首先指出现在很多大学生没有自律性,而自律对学生未来的发展很重要,培养自律性离不开家庭、学校和学生自身的共同努力。
    中间部分分别用“Firstly…”和“Secondly…”从家庭和学校两方面分析如何培养大学生的自律性:一方面,家长应在日常生活中为孩子树立好榜样,家长自律,孩子才能学着自律;另一方面,大学的教育和环境对学生自律性的培养也有一定的影响。
    结尾部分用“In sum…”进行总结,重申观点。接着用“Moreover…”引出对学生自身而言,也应有意识地培养自己的自律性。最后强调自律的重要性。
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