Nowadays, some students have dropped off school to start their own enterprises. They have their own idol: Bill Gates who has lef

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问题    Nowadays, some students have dropped off school to start their own enterprises. They have their own idol: Bill Gates who has left Harvard to devote his energy to Microsoft and became the leader of the software industry. But the actual situation is that many companies have opened are broken now. Should we encourage students to start their own enterprises? Show your opinion and write an article of about 400 words on the following topic: Should College Students Start Enterprises during Their Studying Period?
   In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Should College Students Start Enterprises during Their Studying Period? When Bill Gates left Harvard to devote his energy to Microsoft and became the leader of the software industry, the whole world was shocked. People began to question: "Is college education necessary or just a waste of time?" Some of the young people set Bill Gates as their example and dropped out of schools to start enterprises. Maybe some people think it is pioneering, but in my opinion, it’ s improper. In the four-year campus life, learning is of great importance. As college students, they should be focused on their study. They have to understand what their priority is during that period. They should work hard and master their majors fully. Only in this way can they make good preparations for their work in the future. Those young people should prize the valuable opportunity for study. As we know, when people start an enterprise, experiences are needed. The young people living in campus lack experiences, however. Pure, inexperienced, even naive, usually they are more easily taken in. During this period, the greatest advantage for those students is that they have full time for systematic training. Therefore, they should make full use of the valuable time. After their graduation, when they have gained some experiences, it is the right time for them to start their enterprises. The other difficulty for college students to start enterprises is that they usually lack capital. Their pocket money is certainly far from enough. They usually borrow the money from their parents, their friends or get a bank loan. All those methods will make a heavy burden for their families. If they start their enterprises after their graduation, the whole thing will be quite different: they have worked and they will have some savings to support their enterprises. Some people may disagree: "Gates has proved that starting enterprises before graduation is feasible". But there is only one Gates. Since their time and energy are limited, it’ s unnecessary for those young students to take risks to have a try. It’ s hard for those young people to achieve the balance between their study and their enterprises. They have to do those step by step: master a good major, gather enough experiences and capital, and then start their enterprises. There is an old Chinese saying, "Sharpening an axe will not delay the cutting of firewood". The ancient wisdom taught us that making preparations will not delay the progress in the work. For those college students, do not start enterprises in haste when studying. Making good preparations is really important.

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