For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Electronic Dictionaries. You should write at least

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Electronic Dictionaries. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 电子词典有很多好处
2. 电子词典也有很多弊端
3. 我的看法是……

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答案 Recently, electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more popular among students (1)as an aid to study English. Compared with(2) the traditional dictionaries, electronic dictionaries have a great advantage in helping students to enhance their efficiency in(3) English study. Secondly(4), they are easy to carry and operate. But on the other hand, electronic dictionaries also bring some problems, for example, they often lead to an inaccurate understanding of words and expressions. What’s more (5), since electronic dictionaries are small, some students even use them to cheat in the exam, which will hurt their development in the long term(6). As can be seen (7), electronic dictionaries have advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion, different people should treat them in different ways: for those non-majors, using electronic dictionaries are good since they can help to save a lot of time; but for those English majors, traditional dictionaries are advised as for them, an accurate mastery of English is a must(8).

解析     本文同样为观点型题目。考生除了积累写作模板外,平时还可多积累一些句子和短语,以增强自己的英语表达能力。
    1.…be/become popular among/with sb.为常用搭配,意为“某人/某物在某个群体很受欢迎”。
    2.compared with sth.与……相比。如:Compared with her weakness,her brother is strong and energetic.
    3.enhance efficiency in doing sth./sth.意为“提高效率”。
    4.secondly等逻辑词的使用使行文条理清楚。类似表达还有:first,second/in the first place,in the second place等。考生可在写作过程中积极使用此类连接词。另外,其他逻辑连词如but,therefore,however,in a word,on the one hand,…and on the other hand,what’s more等也在写作中起连接作用。
    5.What’s more,since electronic dictionaries are small,some students even use them to cheat in the exam,which will hurt their development in the long term.该句较长,文中注意句子区分句子的层次:what’s more为插入成分;主句“some students even use them to cheat in the exam”前面使用since引导从句,而后面使用了非限定性定语从句。这使句子意义更加清楚,符合英文表达习惯,也避免了句子层面的呆板。
    6.in the long term意为“从长远看”。
    7.as can be seen为常用表达,意为“可见”。
    8.“…is a must.”中must作名词,意为“必不可少的;必须做的”。如: Environmental protection is a must for the government保护环境是每个政府都应该做的。
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