Directions: In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express y

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问题 Directions:
    In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express your own opinion. You should write at least 150 words.
    多数的网上商店都是有年轻人运作的。一些大学生也试图开办网上商店,以便赚点钱、获得一些社会经验。不同的人对此有不同的看法。你的看法如何?

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答案 Young people are no strangers to e-shops prevalent in the age of e-commerce. Some of them even run e-shops to get more involved in this larger trend of cyber economy. I, however, do not think college students should open e-shops. First of all, running an e-shop requires a lot of time and efforts, which could be better spent for learning purposes. Students could not afford to lose the already precious and limited time simply for gaining some working experience and money. Secondly, running an e-shop requires trading skills and fiscal knowledge. Some students, acting on the impulse of "being their own bosses", are ignorant of financial risks and might end up in heavy debts. A wiser choice is to take some courses about trades, finance and asset management. When they graduate with full understanding of economic basics, they are ready to face and manage risks. In conclusion, college students should spend their valuable time on absorbing knowledge. To lower the risk of business failure, college students should be equipped themselves before they dive into the ever-changing ocean of e-commerce.

解析 本题要求考生对“大学生应否开网店”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段从电子商务时代入题,指出大学生不应该开网店。
第二段阐述原因:其一,经营网店需要大量的时间和精力,这些时间和精力最好还是花在学习上。其二,开网店需要交易技巧和财务知识。大学生凭一时冲动开网店会冒很大的风险。
第三段重申观点:大学生应该先学习技能,然后投身到电子商务的生意中。
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