For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of apology. You should write at least 120 words following the outli

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of apology.  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 给你的朋友John写一封信,说明由于你的疏忽把他借给你的书弄丢了你给他买了一本新的;
    2. 表示真诚歉意;
    3. 主动提出赔偿。
                         A letter of Apology

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答案Dear John, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me last week. The book was missing because of my carelessness. Yesterday I took the book with me to the park and read it there. But when I came back home, it was nowhere to be found. I tried to look for it everywhere but in vain. So I bought a new one for you. I know books are like friends. Once lost, they can never be replaced. I am afraid the new book can never take the place of the old one. And about this irrecoverable loss, I feel really guilty. I have always been careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future. Yours truly, Jill

解析     因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后要立即写信向对方赔礼道歉,这是一种礼貌。此类信件一般包括三个部分:道歉(apologizing)、叙述原因或问题(reason/ problem)、后果及解决办法(consequence & offer of solution)。这类信要写得坦率、诚恳。
    本文结构明晰,开门见山提到为何道歉,接着叙述了丢书的情况以及采取的补救措施。最后还提到了自己的感受。本文表现了语言运用的变化性,例如提到粗心时分别用了“careless”和“carelessness”;丢失分别用“lost”和“missing”等词;第2段的比喻也非常生动。
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