Set an Example for the Children Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) descr

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问题     Set an Example for the Children
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 As can be seen, the picture is divided into two parts. In the first part, a middle-aged man picks up a fish bone to his mother, saying: "Mum, you should take some calcium." In the second part, the middle-aged man’s son follows suit and offers him a bone, saying: "Dad, you also need to take some calcium". The implied message of the picture can actually be summed up by a saying: "Like father, like son." To teach our kids to be decent, we should first of all be decent ourselves. I strongly believe that example is better than precept. There are times when we hear some parents scolding their kids’ for laziness, who happen to be so lazy themselves. For me, those parents have no right to tell off their children, since they are equally lazy. There’s no deny that children would imitate adults’ behavior. They pattern themselves after their parents, internalizing parents’ words and deeds into their behavior and personality. That is why parents should set a good example for their kids. To conclude, children will become what their parents are. Therefore, parents should pay attention to then-words and deeds and form a good example for their children.

解析     这幅图片由两部分组成。在第一部分,一位中年人给他妈妈夹了一条鱼骨,美其名曰让她补钙。在第二部分,中年人的孩子给他夹了一块骨头,也说让他补钙。图片意在提醒成年人要为下一代树立一个好的榜样。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,点明“有其父必有其子”的寓意,提醒成年人要为孩子树立好榜样。
    第二段提出个人看法:身教胜过言教。以责备孩子“懒”为例,父母自己如果不勤奋,就难以让孩子勤快起来。孩子们的模仿能力极强,成年人要为孩子树立好的榜样。
    第三段总结全文:父母要注意自己的言行举止,为孩子们树立一个好榜样。
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