Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your commen

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问题     Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

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答案 The chart given above reflects the elements of employees’ loyalty to a company. These elements are flexible time (accounting for 68%), convenient commute (taking up 78%), healthcare benefits (occupying 86%), retirement benefits (accounting for 87%) and a good manager / boss (the highest proportion, 90%). According to the bar chart, we know that a good manager / boss is the most important element in increasing company loyalty. For one thing, an excellent manager is capable of finding staff’s advantages and putting them in a proper position, which enables employees to bring their talents and potentials into full play. Secondly, a considerate boss is able to help improve their staff’s working skills, which makes them feel that working for a good boss is a happy and rewarding experience. Last but not least, a good manager tends to build a positive and harmonious working atmosphere which enables their employees to work efficiently. Employees’ loyalty is of great importance to the sustainable development of a certain company. A good manager plays the utmost role in the improvement of employees’ loyalty. Hence, the manager / boss of a company should try to be charismatic to make employees’ loyalty strengthened.

解析     本题考查员工忠诚度的影响因素。考生首先要描述图表,说明每个因素所占的百分比。其次要从弹性的工作时间、方便的上下班往返、医疗健康福利、退休福利以及好上司这五个影响因素中选择最重要的一个进行具体的阐述和说明。最后要再次点明主题,总结全文。
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