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Some people insist that the family has the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends have the mo

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问题     Some people insist that the family has the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends have the most important influence on young adults, which view do you agree with? Write a short expository essay about 300 words to explicate your opinion. In your writing, underline your thesis and number your paragraphs.
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答案 Friends Do Most of the Influence on Young Adults (l)Some people think that the family has the most important influence on the young adults. For example, some scientists and statesmen owe their successes to the good upbringing their families have given them. But others think that friends have the most important influence on young adults. As a popular saying goes, "A man is known by the company he keeps." Personally, I think friends do most of the influence on young adults. (2) The reasons are obvious. In school, diligent students, when jeered by pleasure-hunting friends, are possible to become lazy, or even bad. On the other hand, wrong-doers who feel guilty in the presence of their virtuous companions can often turn over a new leaf. As we know, many young adults pay much attention to their playmates. Once they begin having friends, family members usually become less influential. My English teacher’s son is a case in point. When he was in junior high school, he began learning to smoke just because his playmates were smokers. Out of curiosity, he tried. Gradually he formed the habit of smoking. My Uncle’s only son is another case in point. His son was arrested the other day for murdering a lady. It was his playmates who stimulated him to kill the lady for her money. With bad company, children are very easy to slide into bad habits and even to commit crimes. (3)From the above, we can see that the young adults are much easier to be influenced by their playmates, especially by their bad playmates. In their young minds, playmates are their "good" friends. Therefore, someone concludes that tell me who your friends are, and I’ll tell you what kind of person you are. And I think this is absolutely true.
解析     有人认为，家庭对个人的发展影响最大，有人认为朋友对人的影响最大，你认为哪个是对人影响最大的?写一篇说明文，阐述你的观点。下面以朋友对人的影响最大这一观点为例，做一个具体的分析。首先应该考虑到，写朋友并不能只写朋友，也应提一下家庭的影响，否则就有点片面了。接下来应该着重分析朋友影响大的原因。交品质好的朋友有什么影响，交品质不好的朋友又有什么影响?有时候品质好的朋友会把一个懒惰的人往好的方面带，品质不好的朋友也很有可能把一个人领向犯罪的边缘。为了让阐述更加有力，还可以举几个事例。最后再对文
    章加以总结，使文章前后呼应。
    下面，我们列一个英文的提纲，以辅助写作。
    1．Thesis：Family has influence on the young adults，but friends’influence is much bigger．
    2．The reasons why the friends have bigger influence
    A．Diligent students may become lazy because of a pleasure-hunting friend．
    B．Wrong—doers may turn over a good leaf if he meets a good companion．
    C．Many young adults pay much attention to their playmates．
    D．Friends’influence is bigger than family’s
    E．Examples：my English teacher’s son and my uncle’s son
    3．Friends are mirrors of one．
    来看一下句子的组织：
    (1)have influence on someone对……有影响
    一些人认为家庭对青少年的影响是最大的。
    Some people think that the family has the most important influence on the young adults．
    其他的表达方法：Some people think that the family affects the young adults most．
    (2)own…to…把……归功于
    一些著名的科学家和政治家把他们的成功归功于家庭给予他们的良好教育。
    Some scientists and statesmen owe their successes to the good upbringing their families have given them．
    其他的表达方法：Some scientists and statesmen say it is the good upbringing that contributes to their successes．
    (3)朋友是自己的一面镜子。
    A man is known by the company he keeps．
    (4)追求享乐的朋友pleasure-hunting friends
    (5)in the presence of someone在……的面前
    那些经常做错事的人，在他们那些品德好的朋友面前会感到愧疚，往往他们就会变成一个表现好的人。
    Wrong—doers who feel guilty in the presence of their virtuous cornpanions can often turn over a new leaf．
    其他的表达方法：Wrong-doers will feel guilty in front of their virtuous companions and then they become virtuous．
    (6)out of curiosity出于好奇
    (7)stimulate someone to do something怂恿某人做某事
    是他的朋友怂恿他为了钱而杀了那个女士。
    It was his playmates who stimulated him to kill the lady for her money．
    (8)slide into bad habits沾上不好的习惯
    和品行不好的朋友在一起，孩子很容易养成不好的习惯，甚至走向犯罪。
    With bad company，children are very easy to slide into bad habits，and even to commit crimes.
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