Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience Directions: For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question t

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问题     Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience
    Directions:
    For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your opinion on an issue.
    Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of your essay, and the quality and accuracy of the language you use to express your ideas.
    You have 30 minutes to plan and complete your essay.
    Write your essay in the space provided.
    Question
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
    Young people today are less dependent on their parents than young people in the past.
    Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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答案 Parents play an important role in their children’s lives, but the degree to which children should depend on their parents can be controversial. A few people I know try to do everything for their children so that the kids can devote all their time to their studies. However, most parents today encourage their children to be independent. While every family is a little different from each other, I believe that young people today are generally less dependent on their parents than young people in the past because they have access to the internet and can pay for their own expenses. Young people today are more independent because they can easily access the internet. In the past, young people needed their parents to drive them to a mall or shopping center to go shopping, but now they can easily do all their shopping from the comfort of their own home. The internet has definitely made young people less dependent on their parents because they can do many things online without depending on their parents for transportation. Furthermore, if a young person has their own part-time job, they can also have their own spending money. Having their own spending money allows them to do things without having to ask their parents for money. For example, if a student wants to go out to dinner with his friends, he no longer has to ask his parents for money and his parents won’t question him about where they are going. What’s more, he can go to whichever restaurant he’d like because he’s using his own money. Young people today with jobs have their own spending money, so they have more independence. Since students today can easily access the internet and make their own spending money, I believe that young people today are more independent financially than their peers in the past.

解析     孩子的成长和教育看似是一个比较大的社会问题,但当我们把它与自身相结合后,这个问题就简单多啦。我们常常在什么情况下会特别需要父母呢?大多是遇到麻烦需要帮助的时候和有困难需要经济援助的时候。然而,如果这些问题我们都能自己解决的话,就不会那么依赖爸妈了。
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