For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students’ Using Bribes to Become Student L

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students’ Using Bribes to Become Student Leaders. You should write at least 120 words following  the outline given below.
    1.有些大学生通过贿赂谋取学生会等社团的领导职位
    2. 这种行为存在许多弊端
    3. 如何正确对待大学生社团竞选
                 College Students’ Using Bribes to Become Student Leaders

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答案 College Students’ Using Bribes to Become Student Leaders As many college students have observed, there are some students using bribes to become student leaders.Many of these "corrupted students" believe that once they become student leaders they have an edge over their classmates to be candidates for Party membership and scholarship. They also hope that they are able to make a better-looking resume upon graduation. However, there are some negative impacts for using bribes. Firstly, as college students have no stable jobs and rely on their parents, it is not reasonable to impose extra burden to their parents. Secondly, the bribes would do damage to the, friendship among college students.Furthermore, it is horrible to predict that these students would become corrupt officials in the future. Therefore, we should renounce using bribes to become student leaders. The purpose of becoming a student leader should not be the above-mentioned ones but, to improve their communication skills and enrich their college lives.

解析     本文主要是要考生阐述对大学生利用不正当手段谋取社团职位的看法。在布局上,第一段简要介绍有部分大学生利用不正当手段竞选社团领导职务,并说明他们这样做的原因;第二段论述这种行为所带来的负面影响,作为重点来写;第三段说明大学生应如何正确对待这种现象。
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