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  3. A. Title: WHERE TO LIVE—IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY? B. Time limit; 40 minutes C. Word limit; 120-150 words (not includin

A. Title: WHERE TO LIVE—IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY? B. Time limit; 40 minutes C. Word limit; 120-150 words (not includin

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问题     A. Title: WHERE TO LIVE—IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY?
    B. Time limit; 40 minutes
    C. Word limit; 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
    D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence; " Many people appreciate the conveniences of the city. "
    E. Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
Outline:
    1. Conveniences of the city
    2. Attractions of the country
    3. Disadvantages of both
    4. My preference
选项
答案 Many people appreciate the conveniences of the city. Ramified transportation enables them to go anywhere whenever they want; dazzling theatres, cinemas and shopping malls make it possible for them to relax at weekends. Moreover, they can hunt for a premium job to realize their dreams. In addition, they can get better education and health care in the city. However, there are also attractions in the country. In recent years, more and more people flock to the countryside to enjoy fresh air, dainty scenery and peaceful environment and to seek untouched nature and listen to their inner heart. But nothing is perfect and choosing a living environment is no exception. Most people living in the city cannot stand heavy traffic, polluted air or exorbitant living cost, which are the major drawbacks of urbanization. Meanwhile, some people come to the countryside only for vacation due to its inconvenient transportation, outdated information and weak education and medical system. For me, I spent my boyhood in the countryside while youth in the city. On the whole, I prefer to live in the countryside for a simple and tranquil life. Moreover, the government is investing a mass of human, physical and financial resources on the development of the country, which makes me confident that all the inconveniences in the countryside will be solved gradually.
解析     本文要求以“居住在城市还是农村”为题写一篇文章。考生应先根据题干要求列出文章的提纲：1．城市的便利之处；2．农村的魅力所在；3．二者的缺点；4．我的偏好。题干对思路起到重要的引导作用，因此考生在下笔之前要仔细研读题目要求。
    第一段：开门见山，提出城市便利。文章的首句已经给出，考生应顺着该句思路阐述城市的便利之所在：交通发达、娱乐丰富、机遇繁多、教育条件好……。叙述时注意语言的衔接，避免文章不流畅。
    第二段：转变角度，指出乡村秀美。二段描述乡村生活的优点，首句应采用转折词或过渡句，既能与首段形成逆接关系，又能使行文顺畅。乡村的优点可以从空气清新、环境幽静、生活闲适等方面描写。
    第三段：深度探讨，说明各有弊端。题干要求第三段叙述两者的缺点，考生可以选取几个熟悉的角度阐述：城市交通拥挤、空气污浊、生活成本高；农村交通不便、教育质量低、医疗保障不健全等。考生在写作本段时要注意语言的凝练，避免冗长。
    第四段：总结全文，表明自身偏好。末段考生可以根据自己的喜好做出阐述，言之有理即可。
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