For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words f

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚;
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题;
3.我的建议……

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答案 Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most fashionable life styles for modern people, especially young people. Certainly, online shopping is convenient. It helps us to save our valuable time, which can be invested into our work, leisure, and study. However, everything can be divided into two, and online shopping has no exception. It also has many problems. First cf all, most products have very poor quality. What’s worse, it will cause your financial insecurity, because the payment is done through the Internet. Therefore, your bank account or credit card numbers will be stolen and make you suffer a great loss. As far as I’m concerned, the benefits of online shopping greatly outweigh its drawbacks. People should make better use of shopping and bypass its negative effects. People can never be too careful when shopping online.

解析     这是一篇有关社会热点的文章。写作时可以采取传统的三点提纲式,第一段阐述问题,说明现在网上购物已成为一种时尚。第二段给出看法,主要谈论网购的利与弊,优点包括购物相当便利,节约我们宝贵的时间;缺点是网上的货品容易出现质量差的问题,同时我们也有银行账户或信用卡密码被窃取的风险。第三段给出看法,网购还是利大于弊,人们应该避免网购的弊端,小心购物。具体结构如下:
Paragraph One
Describe the phenomenon that most people now view shopping on the internet as a fashionable lifestyle choice.
Paragraph Two
Describe some advantages and disadvantages in online shopping.
Paragraph Three
Give your own opinions about online shopping.
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