Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Yo

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The pie chart shows the factors which influence citizens’ sense of security in public safety. As can be seen, 37.6% of the respondents think that traffic accidents have a negative impact on public safety. A further 25.6% think that public disorder makes them feel insecure, followed by criminal offences (24.8%) and fires (12.0%). The survey results reveal that traffic accidents are the worst disruption to public safety. To address this issue, the government could take two measures. First, the transportation committee could make driving license exams more stringent to make sure that those who pass the exams really have the skills stipulated. It is reported that many drivers are actually not properly trained or tested before they are allowed to drive a car on the road, which is dangerous and unacceptable. Second, as many traffic accidents are caused by drunk driving, drink-drivers shall be severely penalized or even criminally charged. Hopefully with the above measures, less traffic accidents would happen, thereby enhancing citizens’ sense of security in public safety.

解析 该图表显示了群众反映的影响安全感的治安问题。从图表可见,较多人选择交通事故和公共秩序混乱。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法:可采取两个措施解决交通事故的问题。其一,把驾照考试变得更严格,确保司机掌握所需技术;其二,采取措施严惩醉驾。第三段总结全文。
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