For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words based on the chart and outline given below:
   
    1.近十年来X市越来越多的人选择出境旅游
    2.出现这种现象的原因
    3.这种现象可能产生的影响

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答案 Traveling Abroad As is vividly indicated in the above chart, the number of people in city X traveling abroad has increased considerably in the past decade. Especially in the recent five years, the figure has been more than tripled, surging from 40 000 to more than 120 000. The reasons for the increasing number of people traveling abroad are as follows. Firstly, with the development of economy, people are rich enough to afford to travel abroad. Secondly, tourism has been greatly developed over the decade and it is safe and convenient to travel abroad. Thirdly, people are encouraged to go abroad to widen their horizons and to keep themselves informed of what is going on around the world. From the changes reflected in the chart, we can predict that this trend will bring lots of benefits to us. For one thing, traveling abroad will help tourists gain some experience and learn more about different cultures, which will be inevitably beneficial to their own development. For another, it may facilitate the cultural exchange and enhance the friendship between our country and the rest of the world.

解析     第一段通过描述图表中的数据增长,指出出境旅游人数激增的情况。末句中主句之后用现在分词surging引导伴随状语,是亮点之一。
    第二段分析出境游人数不断增长的三点原因。首先,人们有足够的钱支付出境游;其次,旅游业的发展使出境游本身更加安全、方便;最后,人们可以通过出境游增长见识。
    第三段从游客和社会两个角度预测出境游将会产生的影响。在第二段和第三段中,过渡词语的使用使文章层次分明,重点突出,便于理解。
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