The development of information technology has made the world smaller, and made people become more and more isolated from each ot

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问题     The development of information technology has made the world smaller, and made people become more and more isolated from each other at the same time. What do you think are the reasons for this phenomenon, and how to deal with the problem?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    People Are Becoming Isolated from Each Other

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答案 People Are Becoming Isolated from Each Other Though the development of information technology has made the world smaller, I think people are becoming more and more isolated from each other. There are three reasons for this. Firstly, due to fierce competition, modern people have to work hard in order to keep up with the step of city life, so that they have less time to communicate with each other. Everybody is busy all the time. Moreover, living in apartments in different blocks, people are far away from each other. It is not convenient for them to meet each other freely. Finally, the popular use of telephones and overwhelming dependency on the Internet prevent modern people from seeing and visiting each other quite often. Nowadays, instead of writing letters and sending postcards, people simply send an e-mail or make a phone call to send good wishes in a few minutes. In some sense, people are becoming mechanic. In order to solve the problem, people need to be fully aware of the fact that the modern ways of communication cannot fully take the place of the traditional ones. Sending e-mails cannot have the same effect as writing letters or face-to-face talk. Traditional ways should be encouraged and people should write letters and visit each other as often as possible.

解析     本题是一个给定观点型题目,要求考生围绕给定的论题或材料进行论证。这里指出了当前中国社会生活中存在的一个比较矛盾的现象——随着信息技术的发展,世界越来越小,人们却彼此越来越孤立。题目要求考生对此展开分析,提出自己的观点和看法,然后进行论证。
    本题的论点是当前的一个热点话题,可说的话很多,因此在具体的写作思路上也多种多样,例如:分析这一问题产生的原因;该问题的危害性;解决该问题的建议等等。按照题目要求,考生应该首先分析该问题产生的原因,继而提出解决问题的建议。
    问题成因:1.工作、竞争压力的增大使现代人太忙而无暇交友;2.随着城市化进程的深入,人们往往离得比较远,不方便相互拜访;3.手机、网络等现代通讯技术的发展使现代人改变了交往方式;4.现代人的生活观念已与先前不同,他们更喜欢享受个人的私生活;5.还有一部分人是为了避免不必要的麻烦而不愿与人交往,等等。
    解决办法:1.即使工作再忙,也应该保持正常社交,因为与人交流是缓解压力的有效方式;2.鼓励使用传统的交流方式,比如写信或面对面交流;3.现代人可以选择结伴出游或周末聚会的形式进行交往,等等。针对不同的问题,应该有相应的解决方案。
    范文主要采用了原因1、2、3以及解决办法1、2进行写作。
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