The Goal Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly

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问题     The Goal
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 In the picture, there are two students. The boy is staring at his exam paper marked 59.5, while the girl is fixing her eyes on her exam paper marked 99.5. They both have the same thought—"Just 0.5 point short of my goal". The intention of the picture is to tell us the importance of setting a reasonable goal. The boy is not ambitious compared with the girl, which makes them so different in what they have achieved. Prom my point of view, a reasonable goal—the goal you can attain if you try hard—has two main functions. Firstly, a reasonable goal is like a beacon, which gives you hope. The girl in the picture is a case in point. She might be a bit frustrated at the exam. Yet, her goal of getting a full mark will encourage her to keep on working hard. Secondly, a reasonable goal is like an engine that drives us forward. If we are all like the unambitious boy in the picture, we will end up living a mediocre life, sluggish and lazy. In conclusion, setting an ambitious but reasonable goal will give us hope and strength to live an extraordinary life.

解析     这幅图片刻画了两名学生面对发回的试卷的情景。两个人离他们的目标都只差0.5分,女孩的目标是满分,而男孩则是及格。写作时可从“设置合理的目标”这一角度加以讨论。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,指出图片向读者传递了设立合理目标的重要性。
    第二段提出个人看法:合理的目标主要有两方面的作用。其一,目标像灯塔一样,给我们希望。其二,目标就像引擎那样让我们不断前进。
    第三段总结全文:远大而合理的目标能给予我们希望与力量,以过上不平凡的生活。
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