The following chart shows the reasons that young couples don’t live with their parents after marriage. Look at the chart careful

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问题     The following chart shows the reasons that young couples don’t live with their parents after marriage. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart and give your comments.

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答案 Why Don’t Young Couples Live with Parents After Marriage? As we can see in the pie chart, there are several reasons why married couples would not like to live together with their parents. Different living habits and different thoughts and ideas are the two main factors, each taking 32 percent. From the pie chart, we can know that besides the two main reasons above, economic disputes, housing problems, privacy issues and difficulties in deciding to live with whose parents are the rest reasons. As a matter of fact, most young couples find it difficult to live with elder people. First of all, different living habits and ideas always cause disputes between the two generations. Most young couples have some bad living habits which make their parents worry about them. The difference in cognition about new things also makes it difficult for the two generations to understand each other. Moreover, most parents have already retired and they spend more time at home, so they would like to do everything they can for their children. However, many young people cannot accept such behavior for they feel that their privacy has been violated. On the whole, it is not without reason that most young people do not like to live with their parents. In conclusion, there might be conflicts between young couples and their parents when living together. To solve the problem, young people should know that what parents do is totally out of love, and aging parents should also learn to respect young couples and give them space and time of their own.

解析     本题为图表作文。从饼图中可以看出,年轻人结婚后不和父母一起住的主要原因有两个:生活习惯和思想观念的不同。在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要说明饼图中的内容;然后具体阐述年轻人婚后不和父母同住的原因;最后表明自己的观点。
    开头部分描述饼图中的内容,先指出年轻人婚后不和父母一起住的两个主要因素:不同的生活习惯和不同的思想观念各占32%。然后简单说明其余因素。
    中间部分着重分析两个方面的原因。首先,不同的生活习惯和思想观念容易引起两代人的纠纷:很多年轻人会有一些令父母担忧的坏生活习惯;对新事物认知的不同也使得两代人很难理解彼此。其次,大部分父母已经退休,更多的时间都待在家里,因此他们愿意为孩子做任何事,但年轻的夫妻却认为隐私被侵犯,不能接受。
    结尾部分总结全文,指出年轻人应该懂得父母为他们所做的每一件事都是出于关爱。而父母也应该学会尊重年轻人,并给予他们自己的空间和时间。
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