2. 外语
  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Criticism. You should write at least 120 words followi

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Criticism. You should write at least 120 words followi

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Criticism. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 批评在日常生活中很常见
    2．不同的人对待批评的态度不同
    3．我的看法
                                 Criticism
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答案 It is not surprising in everyday life that people are criticized for some reasons. Students may be criticized by their parents or teachers possibly because they have done a had job in exams. If workers could not accomplish their tasks, they would not be free from criticism by their boss. People have different attitudes toward criticism. When criticized, some people become annoyed and try every possible means to defend themselves, regarding criticism as injustice or nonsense. However, others hold that criticism will help them get aware of their shortcomings, so criticism may become a good chance of success in their life. In my opinion, while criticism makes unpleasant feelings, we should not turn a deaf ear to it. Actually, criticism contributes to good results in most eases. Just us the Chinese saying goes, "Good medicine that tastes bitter will help one’s illness."
解析     用词亮点：(1) 在第一段第二句中，possibly意思为“也许”，相当于probably，使句子语气变得很含蓄。(2) 第一段尾句中，free from意思为“没有……”。(3) 第二段第二句中，try every possible means to意思为“千方百计做……”。类似的表达法有try hard to，make every effort to，spare no efforts to，endeavor to等。(4) 第三段首句中，turn a deaf ear to意思为“对……充耳不闻”。
    句式亮点：(1) 在第一段首句中“It is not surprising in everyday life that…”是一个引出日常生活事实的结构。(2) 第一段尾句利用虚拟语气陈述某种现象或事实。(3) 在第二段第二句中，连词when后面接过去分词criticized，使句子变得简练。(4) 在第三段尾句中，“Just as the Chine saying goes，…”用于引用谚语。类似的表达法有“Just as the Chinese proverb says，…”。
    篇章亮点：(1) 第二段首句中“People have different attitudes toward…”意思为“不同的人对……有不同的态度”，是一个列举不同态度的主题句。(2) 第三段首句中In my opinion意思为“我认为”，对上述内容加以总结。
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