Friendship is forever a topic for human beings. How do you view "friendship"? Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of abou

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问题    Friendship is forever a topic for human beings. How do you view "friendship"?
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                                FRIENDSHIP
   You are to write in three parts.
   In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
   In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 [1]Friends are indispensable in our daily life. [2]When we feel happy, we can share the pleasure with them; when we feel gloomy, friends will comfort us; when we have some secrets, we just want to share them with friends; and when we have difficulties, friends are always ready to help us. [3]Life is a bouquet, friendship is flower. [4]We cannot live without friendship just as we cannot survive without air or water. [5]Friendship gives us a feeling of security and warmth; friendship encourages us to go ahead when we encounter difficulty. [6]Building friendship takes time. True friendship re-quires equality and loyalty. [7]It is an in-depth relationship combining trust, support, understanding, empathy and intimacy. True friendship should be able to stand all kinds of tests. [8]Just as an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." [9]In conclusion, we must treasure our friends and friendship. A good friend can be a good companion in our lives. The more friends we have, the more help we can get from them and the more pleasure we can share with them. If we have true friends, we will feel happy in the world. Analysis

解析    [1] 开门见山,用indispensable突出友谊的重要性。
   [2] 使用排比的修辞手法,增强表达效果。用在开头,必能吸引读者。
   [3] 用名言说明友谊在生活中的重要性。
   [4] 用just as进行比喻。
   [5] 阐述友谊的作用。
   [6] 阐述什么是真正的友谊。
   [7] in-depth relationship为语言亮点。
   [8] 引用人们熟知的一句名言。
   [9] 结论:我们应该珍惜朋友和友谊。treasure突出了朋友和友谊的重要。
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