For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Competition and Cooperation. You should write at least

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Competition and Cooperation. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1. 人生中竞争很重要
    2. 然而,合作也很重要
    3. 我的看法

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答案 Competition and Cooperation Competition is very important in a person’s life. [1] The so-culled "jungle principle" emphasizes that the fittest survives, which expands the essence of competition to a profound extent. In our modern society, so many well-educated and talented people [2] strive to be outstanding and establish themselves, and competition, [3] the way for them to realize their dream, becomes especially [4] more severe than we think it should be. A person should compete for his survival; [5] otherwise, he would be thrown out of the tide of his age. Cooperation, [6] however, also plays a significant role in a person’s career. The development of transportation and communication brings our world into a mobile stage. People all over the world get in touch with each other more easily than before. It is hard for a person who is isolated from the society to have a deep understanding of the world he lives in, [7] let alone accomplishment in his career. In some sense, cooperation is the requirement of the information era. [8] My viewpoint is that the way for a person to achieve success is to keep a good balance between competition and cooperation. [9] In other words, he has to cooperate with others to be more competitive, and compete to get a better environment for cooperation.

解析 [1] 一种解释引言的句型,emphasizes也可以用indicates,implies等。
[2] 意思为“努力”。类似表达法有try hard to,make efforts to,endeavor to等。
[3] 使用同位语可以使语言简练,并增加语言的地道性。
[4] 利用比较结构起强调作用。
[5] 意思为“否则的话”,含蓄虚拟语气的标志。
[6] 意思为“然而”,把连接词插在主谓之间,使语言富有变化。
[7] 意思为“更不用说”,表示否定意义的追加。类似表达法有much less,still less等。
[8] 意思为“我的观点是”,相当于I think that。
[9] 意思为“换而言之”,进一步说明,使观点更具体。
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