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  3. Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments.

Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments.

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问题    Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
   1) interpret the chart, and
   2) give your comments.
   You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
   
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答案 As is graphically illustrated in the bar chart, the percentage of calvities among different age groups are different. We can clearly see that the rate of calvities among the group aged from 25 to 35 accounts for 50.8%, which is the highest proportion of all groups. And the elderly group has the lowest rate of calvities. Several factors, to my way of thinking, can be easily found to account for the phenomenon among which I would like to name three most significant ones as follows. At the first place, there is no denying that poor eating, work and rest habits, various pressure as well have great effect on hair. Moreover, some shampoos usually contain harmful chemical substances which pose damage to the scalp. Still, certain modern unhealthy life styles such as cold drinks and cold shower are harmful to hair. In a word, it is high time we cultivated a better awareness of it and channelled actions in the light of concrete facts.
解析    本次作文题是一个柱状图，图表是关于年龄与脱发(calvities)率。其中25～35岁的人脱发率最高，由工作和生活压力、作息和饮食不规律等引起。全文结构如下：
   第一段：分析图表基本信息。
   第二段：分析原因。
   第三段：发表个人观点，进行总结。
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