For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Electricity in the Dormitory Be Cut Off after M

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Electricity in the Dormitory Be Cut Off after Midnight? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1. 许多学校午夜后就把宿舍的电断掉,强制学生休息
    2.有人认为这对学生白天的学习有益,有人认为这限制了学生自由安排生活
    3.你的看法

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答案 Should Electricity in the Dormitory Be Cut Off after Midnight? [1]The electricity in the dormitory of some colleges is cut off after midnight to ensure students to go to bed early.[2]Some people agree with this conduct for it is beneficial for students’daytime study;while some argue that this regulation imposes restrictions on students’private life. [3]For me,I agree with the latter opinion.[4]First,a college student is already an adult,he can control his work and rest schedule.[5]Second,now people’s life depends on electricity very much.[6]It is inconvenient when a student needs to use an appliance but the electricity is unavailable.[7]Third,sometimes a student may study late.Without electricity,he can not finish his assignment on time and this is not good for his study. [8]Hence,colleges should abandon this unnecessary operation and offer 24-hour electricity supply to students.

解析 [1]提出现象,对应提纲中的第1点。ensure students to...是亮点表达。
[2]用while连接两种对立的观点。agree with引出支持态度,argue表明异议,动词使用准确。impose...on...“施加……于……”是亮点短语。
[3]For me引出自己的看法;the latter opinion使行文简洁。
[4][5][6][7]用First...Second...Third...从三方面阐述。depends on是亮点词组:用It is inconvenient...这个句子例证第2点,增强说服力。
[8]Hence“因此”引出第3段中的总结。abandon是亮点词汇。
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