Read carefully the following excerpt, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: 1) Summar

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    1) Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    2) Comment on whether it is worth studying overseas. You should support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
                                                1 in 4 Chinese Students Drop Out of Ivy Universities and Return Home for Jobs
    Chinese students have been heading abroad to pursue higher education for a long time. In hopes of better education and job prospect, young Chinese have been flocking to the U.S. and U.K. But a new study reveals that while many Chinese are enrolling at foreign institutions, not all are staying.
    Citing data compiled by the 2013 Overseas-Returned Graduate Recruitment Report and university statistics, the South China Morning Post reports that one in four Chinese students attending Ivy League universities in the U.S. end up dropping out. The study said that many found it difficult to adjust and adapt to the new environment, citing problems like language barriers and differences in the education system.
    On top of that, those students who do end up finishing their degrees don’t stay in the host country for long, and usually end up back in China. The study, which examined more than 9,000 professionals in 23 major cities in a cross-section of fields, found that half of returning graduates say the main obstacle of staying overseas is "economic conditions", followed by related issues like extremely competitive employment market, and poor social skills, which accounted for 38.9 percent and 33.6 percent of respondents’ reasons given, respectively.
    According to a report by the Center for China and Globalization (CCG), a nonprofit think tank in Beijing, students are dropping out of unaccredited higher education institutions, which are often referred to as "diploma factories." These schools in the U.S. are often similarly named to name-brand schools, purposefully misleading students to enroll. According to the think tank, 95 percent of diplomas from such shady institutions were given to students from China.

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答案 Is an Overseas Study Worth It? Studying abroad has been popular among young people for their higher education instead of studying in their own countries. According to the given excerpts, many overseas students have dropped out due to several reasons. Some are reported to be unable to adjust to local study environment because of language barriers and culture shock. Some drop out owing to huge financial burdens and poor social skills while others return to their home country because they have been enrolled in "diploma factories". So is this kind of overseas study really worthwhile? In my opinion, only those who have clear aims and full preparations benefit most. Supporters for overseas study believe this international education really benefit them a lot. This not only opens their mind to another culture, but also helps them develop their diverse skills such as communication skills and change their ways of thinking of themselves and their future career. Such great experience enables them to handle people from different backgrounds. However, not all students can survive in the competitive educational jungle. According to the given data, almost 25% of students may drop out of universities due to many difficulties like language problems, unfamiliarity with academic references and inability to adapt to a new environment. Another issue is that after spending a fortune in another country, those survivors still go back to their own counties to find a job, which does not meet their initial expectation about career planning. Therefore, overseas study is not always a good choice for all students. They should have a clear goal, enough money and ability to study in a new place and reasonable expectations of themselves. Otherwise, they may either fail in this study or feel disappointed about this experience.

解析 海外教育或出国留学一直都是一个热门话题,年轻人是否应该出国学习呢?所给材料指出并不是所有的海外留学生都能完成学业荣耀回国。一些学生因为语言、文化等问题难以适应国外生活和学习而中途退学,一些学生因为经济原因、激烈的就业市场、缺乏社交技能而退学,还有一些学生则是进入劣质的未被认可的高等教育机构而退学。总而言之,出国留学不是那么美好的事情。因此,考生们在概述部分要综述这些退学原因,在展开论述时,也可以将这些退学原因作为论据进行阐述。
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