For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Private Tutoring. You should write at least 120 wo

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Private Tutoring. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below:
1.为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍。
2.原因及可能出现的问题。
3.你的看法。

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答案 Private Tutoring (1) At present, private tutoring is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, the proportion of parents sparing much money to find private tutors has reached as high as 88.3 percent. (2) To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons as follows. To begin with, people are (3) attaching greater importance to education and expecting higher of their children. What’ s more, as private tutoring is usually (4) one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of their pupils and may help them improve study performance more easily. However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. It takes up so much of the pupils’ time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. (5) As far as I am concerned, greater emphasis should be laid on the improvement of classroom teaching quality. Only in this way can the younger generation be healthily brought up.

解析 (1)描述现象,引入该段中心“为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍”。而后的具体数据说明,越来越多的家长花钱给孩子请家教。
(2)分析这一现象的原因,最后用转折来引出这一现象可能出现的问题。
(3)attach great importance to意为“把重点放在……”。
(4)one—to一one意为“一对一”的。
(5)表明自己的观点,认为重点应该放在提高课堂教学的质量上。最后使用强调句加强语气。
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