Man-made beauty is a new word in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How d

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问题     Man-made beauty is a new word in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you comment on this phenomenon?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    My Views on Man-Made Beauty

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答案 My Views on Man-Made Beauty The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people. At least they become more beautiful. But every coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons. Firstly, one’s appearance is the God’s blessing, and has been part of our body. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are found mammary gland disease. The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. ,which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life. The practice and some contest about man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty. Concerning the above possible harm the practice may bring about, we are strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner hearts. The inner beauty outweighs the outside beauty in the long run.

解析     本题是一个自由发挥型题目,要求考生就社会上出现越来越多的人造美女这一现象陈述自己的观点。整容作为一个新兴产业,正在得到越来越多的青睐,特别是年轻女性。这个话题可以从两个方面入手:
    思路1:支持整容。
    爱美之心人皆有之,整容无可厚非。更何况美丽自己,愉悦他人,既是礼貌的一部分,也是自我的一种体现。整容业的产生和发展是医学进步的产物,也是当社会稳定、物质生活在很大程度上得到满足之后的精神层面的追求。
    思路2:不支持整容。
    整容是对美丽的误解。真正的美应该是内在美,来自于良好的自身修养,以及高尚的道德品质。过分注重外表会让人忽略对内在美的追求。整容也会带来许多直接的恶果。比如隆胸手术容易使女性患乳腺癌等。还有迈克尔-杰克逊就是一个典型的整容手术失败的例子。
    范文主要采纳了思路2进行写作。
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