Industrial safe operation has long been a matter of considerable concern of our government. Hove-ever, the occurrence of acciden

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问题     Industrial safe operation has long been a matter of considerable concern of our government. Hove-ever, the occurrence of accidents, especially of death accidents is still increasing in the past five years despite much governmental effort, There is a discussion in a newspaper about how to curb the rising of death accidents effectively.
    Write an essay for the same newspaper to
      (1) describe the drawing,
      (2) analyze the reasons, and
      (3) state your position.
    In your essay, make full use of the information provided in the drawing printed below.
    You should write 160~200 words on ANSWER SHEET2.


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答案 As is revealed in the drawing, in the year of 2004, in China altogether 803 571 cases of lethal accidents happened, killing 136 755 people, of which 3 639 cases happened in coal mines, claiming 6 027 lives. The figures and statistics should remind us

解析     (1)这是提纲式与图表结合的作文。考生首先应仔细阅读题目要求、提纲、观察图表,弄清三者之间的关系,然后据此确定自己的写作主旨。
    (2)根据所给提纲的数量确定写作的段落数量,把形式上不完整或者只规定了段落主旨的提纲进行扩展和补充,形成每段的主题句。
    (3)首先简要描述图表所提示的问题,抓住重点;然后结合实际情况阐述引起这一问题的原因;最后提出解决办法,阐明自己的观点。
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