Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then inter

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.

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答案 The cartoon depicts two pictures. In the first one, two filaments of a light bulb are fighting against each other, so electric current is not allowed to pass through. The result is pitch-darkness in the surrounding. While in the second drawing, the two filaments work hand in hand, which has brought brightness. The idea conveyed by the cartoons is apparent: in modern society, it is cooperation that makes our life smooth and bright. If you lived on a farm two hundred years ago, you could be less cooperative to earn a successful life, just working hard in your fields, feeding your fowls and cows. But in modern times, people are living more and more cooperatively. For example, in a football match, all players on the team must work with joint efforts in order to win the match. Such activities require teamwork. You can see workers at the assembly line doing their parts of work individually, but you can hardly see any products accomplished by only one person. With the rapid development of transportation and communication systems like the Internet, cooperation is becoming more and more indispensable and vital for a person to survive in this world. Just like the proverb goes, "Many hands make light work." Human beings are social beings. No one can survive without cooperation. Being students, our study also demands teamwork. We often help each other by pointing out each other’s mistakes and exchanging ideas. In a sense, cooperation can help us achieve success and confidence in study as well as many other fields.

解析     本文是图画式观点论证型作文。考题中给出两幅图片,第一组图片中灯泡的两个灯丝是分开的,握成拳头状,呈对峙状态,灯泡没有亮,周围漆黑一片。第二组图片中的两个灯丝联到一起,因此灯泡亮了。这里的光明代表着希望和胜利,因此图画中的信息是:要想成功相互合作很重要。在确定了这个主旨之后,可以用一些例证及阐述来证明观点的正确性,再结合实际表明合作的重要性。在结尾处,应该重申观点,自然得出结论。
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