Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160—200 words. Your essay must be written clearly and meet the requi

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问题     Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160—200 words. Your essay must be written clearly and meet the requirements below:
    1) Describe the picture.
    2) Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture.
    3) And give your comments.
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答案 As is depicted in the cartoon entitled "a crying water tap", water is continually dripping onto the ground, regrettably coming to no use. On the floor is spread some water, which is absolutely wasted, and the scene points to a rather thought-provoking problem of resources waste in the present day society. The drawer of the picture probably desires that the public should realize the severe shortage of fresh water and should get rid of their negligent attitudes towards its value. Nowadays, some people seem to be rather indifferent to fresh water shortage, not only because they believe that such resources come from inexhaustible supplies but also because they do not place a high value on valuable things at all. Even worse, they hold the same notions towards many other natural resources than water - electricity, paper, and food, just to name a few. Sad to say, those people never get round to noticing the sad scene depicted in the picture. It seems that they pretend not to belong to the global village or they have misconceptions about nature conservation. Given the painful situation, it is high time that the importance of nature conservation be directed to the public not simply by means of guidance but also by way of law enforcement. Unless such an epidemic is checked, we will run into great troubles in store for us, and even worse, there will not be water dripping out of the tap any more.

解析     从漫画的内容来看,读者不难发现该漫画作者所要表达的寓意:人们的不良习惯将会造成资源的浪费和自然资源的枯竭。
    本文第一自然段简要描述了画面的内容。第二自然段的分析紧扣画面内容并就自然资源的浪费问题展开阐述性了论证,从水资源的浪费问题上升到了自然资源的浪费问题。在上述两段的基础上,自然地在最后一段提出了解决问题的方案。
    整篇文章主要采用的是分析性的阐述思维方法,先表明了作者的观点,之后进行具体的论证。围绕着"水资源"、"问题"、"自然资源"、"使用"等关键词概念展开。作者在字里行间流露出对浪费资源行经的批评态度。注意作者在表达情感使用的各种语言手段。
    有关与自然资源的问题的立意都可以沿用本文的篇章结构和组织。
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