Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the chart, and 2) give your comment

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问题     Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
    1) describe the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 As the table shows, 55% of the students develop a habit of having breakfast regularly, which contributes to their physical health and stamina. However, 25% of them consume junk food for their breakfast, leading to unbalance of nutrition. Worse still, 20% of them skip breakfast and easily get sick. They also feel hungry and find it hard to concentrate in class. Given the different breakfast habits, one would assume that parents are responsible for those habits. Sometimes, parents are too busy to cook for their kids, so they offer the kids some cash to save them the trouble. Without supervision, kids would buy attractive food rather than nutritious food, such as fries and cola. Some of them even skip breakfast to save money for movies or comic books. To tackle this problem, parents had better prepare breakfast for their kids. Of course, this sounds like a lot of work on the part of parents. However, extra work is well worth doing for the sake of their kids’ health and study.

解析 这幅表格反映了学生吃早餐及其相应的健康情况。从表中可见,有规律地吃早餐能使人保持身体健康,值得提倡。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段简要描述表格内容。第二段指出导致表格情况的可能原因:家长因工作忙,早上只是拿钱给孩子自己买早餐。但学生缺乏自律,会把早餐钱用于别处。第三段提出个人的建议:为了孩子的健康和学习,家长最好能为孩子准备早餐。
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