A phenomenon emerges that an increasing number of on-the-job people, especially those in their 20s or early 30s, return to unive

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问题    A phenomenon emerges that an increasing number of on-the-job people, especially those in their 20s or early 30s, return to university out of various reasons. Some people return to university in the hope of temporarily avoiding pressure from current work and life, while others intend to grasp the golden opportunity for self-advancement before it is too late. What do you think of this phenomenon?
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   A Way of Self-improvement or an Escape?
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 A Way of Self-improvement or an Escape? Nowadays, a popular trend of on-the-job people returning to university has aroused people’s concern. Some return to university with the aim of escaping from reality, while others desire for self-improvement. From my perspective, I firmly agree with the latter. Firstly, people should return to university to gain special skills that are more career-oriented. Having been on the job for many years, they know better which professional skill they are deficient in. What’s more, the diploma and advanced knowledge they get will contribute to pay rise, promotion and new employment. Additionally, they can make acquaintance with more elites. Students of great insight can learn from each other and optimize their resources available. Those who return to university to escape the pressures of work and life should face reality for reasons below. First, it is a waste of time and money to stay on campus without concrete goals. If they devote themselves to their jobs, they will gain greater achievements. Moreover, they are likely to miss opportunities of promotion or work training. In addition, since they will have to confront pressure again in the near future, it is useless and even risky to consider the university as an ivory tower. In view of the discussions above, on-the-job people should return to university for self-improvement rather than for escape.

解析    开头部分
   首先点出重返校园的社会现象,然后直接引出观点:人们重返校园主要是为了提升个人能力。
   中间部分
   1)从三方面分析人们重返校园的积极意义,其中包括:to gain special skills that are  more career-oriented,to get the  diploma and advanced knowledge 和make acquaintance with  more elites。
   2)同时指出也有人重返校园是为了逃避压力,并通过论证表明观点:此种做法并不能够真正克服压力,只会造成资源浪费。
   结尾部分
   再次重申观点:在职人员应当为了提升个人能力重返校园,而不是为了逃避现实。
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