Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and then
    3) give your comments.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

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答案 As is illustrated in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together travel in the journey of life. Accordingly, this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: the people who are in the dark and want to turn the corner can not make it respectively but in turn have to choose to pull together in times of trouble. There are several reasons accounting for this. Since we have to live in an on-the-move lifestyle, we may encounter various plights, where we would be at a loss. So it’ s better to seek for others’ assistance. Further more, if we do not offer help to each other when we confront dilemmas, we will not realize our dream. And to build a harmonious society in China, no issue is as basic as to conduct coordination in face of disasters. Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the value of mutual aid. It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other. To begin with, the government should make laws to encourage people to unite. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they are in trouble. Only in those ways, can we make people, even strangers, help each other.

解析     范文正确解读了图画的深层含义,主题思想鲜明,论述的层次清晰严谨,论据紧紧围绕中心,合乎逻辑性。第一段概括了图画反映出的寓意,第二段分析了遇到困境相互帮助的必要性,第三段提出了如何发扬互帮互助的精神。句子与句子、段落与段落之间采用了多种衔接手法,过渡自然通畅,整体性强。
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