For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of depression on campus and then explain the causes of this phenomenon and propose solutions to reduce it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
   

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答案 In recent years, depression has become the biggest mental disease among college students. Every year quite a few students who feel severely depressed just like the man in the picture are reported to commit suicide. Among the reasons that lead to depression, the pressure of interpersonal relationship comes first. Breaking up with boyfriends or girlfriends and conflicts with the mentor always make college students blue. The second reason is the stress of study. Many students feel that the study burden imposed on them exceeds their limit and thus sink into a deep depression Besides, employment pressure and a sense of inferiority are also important reasons. To reduce the depression on campus, universities should adopt precautionary measures such as promoting psychological education and reducing students’ study burden. Parents should care more for their children and provide them with emotional support when they get frustrated. Above all, college students should learn to adjust their mood and try doing something to cheer themselves up. With due efforts from these three parties, I believe, things will certainly make a change for the better.

解析 这是一篇图画型议论文,要求考生就大学生抑郁这种现象做阐述。文章内容安排如下:
第一段结合图画内容,引出大学生抑郁这一话题。
第二段逐一分析导致大学生抑郁的原因。
第三段提出改善这种情况的办法。
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