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  3. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: These days, many children have difficulty payin

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: These days, many children have difficulty payin

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问题 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
These days, many children have difficulty paying attention and concentrating in their classes at school
What are the reasons for this? How can it be dealt with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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答案In recent times, teachers are increasingly finding that their pupils do not pay full attention or concentrate properly during class time. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem. One of the major reasons for this is that teachers now lack the freedom to discipline children. In the past, teachers could use any methods they felt appropriate to control pupils in class, even physical punishment. However, the balance has now changed, with children aware that there are limits to what a teacher can do and without this respect they do not concentrate if they do not want to. There have, for example, been cases where pupils have sued teachers for disciplining them too harshly. Children should of course not be abused, but teachers must be given more power to use the methods that they think suitable to control the class without fear of recrimination. Another factor may be the diet of children. Accumulating research has reported that the additives in snacks and soft drinks can cause behavioural changes such as hyperactivity. This may lead to a lack of ability to concentrate in class. To prevent this, educational authorities must make sure that these snacks are not available at the school. Parents have a part to play as well, and they must ensure that their children are not given too much of these types of snacks at home. In conclusion, children may have difficulty paying attention in class because of a lack of discipline in schools and additives in snacks and the solutions are to give more power back to teachers and to limit the availability of certain unhealthy foods.
解析 本题是较为典型的“problem-solution”命题，即题目陈述某种社会问题，要求回答其成因及解决方式。这类题型一般采用四段式，主体段一段讲成因，一段讲解决方法；也可以采用混合式，即一段讲第一个成因及其解决方法，一段讲另一个成因及其解决方法。范文采用后一种行文方式。
问题涉及当下孩子学习时难以集中精神的问题。其成因可包括：学生压力大，睡眠不足，精神不佳；接触电子产品过度；老师课堂控制力下降；零食和饮料过多；周边环境干扰过多等等。其解决方法可就选用的原因作具体阐述。
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