You have just had a terrible trip to a foreign country. Post a message to an English online forum: 1)telling other travelers

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问题 You have just had a terrible trip to a foreign country. Post a message to an English online forum:
   1)telling other travelers some of your bad experiences:
   2)giving them some suggestions about taking a trip.
   You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your message. Use "Wang Lin" instead.

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答案 Hello, everyone. I just came back from a seven-day trip to London. London, the capital of British, is a famous city with a long history and colorful cultures. But the bad experiences happened there made me feel unhappy and depressed. During the first three days, I visited some great wonders and enjoyed the beautiful scenery in London. However, on the fourth day, when I was taking the subway, a young man sitting next to me suddenly took my phone and ran away in the blink of an eye. What a terrible trip it is! So, if you plan to visit London, please be aware of taking care of your valuables. And you’ d better come there with your family or friends. Wang Lin

解析    这篇作文要求写一篇网络论坛发帖,属于应用文文体写作。该网络论坛发帖的内容是关于自己的一次糟糕的国外旅行经历。根据题目要求,考生在写作时要围绕不愉快的国外旅行经历和旅行建议这两个方面来写。值得注意的是,考生要注意网络论坛发帖这种非正式文体的写作方式,不必太过正式;而且,考生一定要注意题目中的trip to a foreign country,作文中谈到的旅行地点必须是国外地方;另外,还要还要注意时态的运用,主要用一般过去时或现在完成时。语言表达也一定要清晰明了,避免晦涩难懂。
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