Read carefully the following excerpt on fighting against telecom fraud in China, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 20

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt on fighting against telecom fraud in China, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    . summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    . give advice on how to solve the problem of telecom fraud. You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
                                Fight Against Telecom Fraud
    Two men have been arrested in connection with a telecom fraud case in east China’s Shandong Province, believed to have led to the death of a teenager.
    The case came to public attention following widespread media reports of the death of Xu Yuyu, an 18-year-old high school graduate in Linyi City.
    Xu was reported to have lost 9 900 yuan of her university tuition fees to telecom fraudsters and, according to the reports, died of a cardiac arrest.
    Just a few miles away, another student, Song Zhenning, was also reported to have died in the same way, having lost money in another fraud case.
    A third similar incident has also been reported in the city.
    "In those cases, the suspects all provided accurate information about the victims, such as their enrollment information or the bank account number, which means some related departments might be connected with the criminal party," Zhu Xiaoding, a Beijing-based lawyer, said.
    Tian Zumeng, from the Education Ministry, said that university students should be alert to such fraud and not take it for granted if someone asks you to provide your bank accounts and passwords.
    "Justice and administrative departments should, in solving these cases, investigate thoroughly and call criminals to account," Zhu said.
    Meng Jianzhu, head of the Commission for Political and Legal Affairs of the CPC Central Committee, made the following remarks during an inspection visit to Shanghai, saying that "To curb fraud, laws and regulations should be updated and judicial interpretation should be released in a timely manner to provide legal authority for handling relevant cases."

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答案 Fight Against Telecom Fraud Is Necessary Two shocking deaths caused by telecom fraudsters who have been arrested bring this rampant crime into public attention. Both personal alertness and national combat are urgently called for to bring the grisly crime to full justice. A public plague, telecom fraud feeds itself greedily on the infringement of personal information. Among the mounting cases, only those facilitated with accurate information about the victims have a higher shot of hit. So the real culprit—theft of personal information—must be smashed. Stopping the leak of private information is now a top priority and severe punishments must be imposed on those who dare abuse information for fraud, robbery or extortion. To achieve this, cooperation with and supervision over key industries and Internet platforms must be carried out. For example, commercial banks, telecommunications operators and financial institutions should be urged to strictly follow information security rules. Moreover, laws and regulations should be updated and judicial interpretation should be released in a timely manner to enable legal authorities to handle relevant cases. Thirdly, new technologies including big data and cloud computing should be applied to fight against telecom fraud which is also becoming more intelligent. Lastly, the public should raise their awareness of protecting their individual information and avoiding leaks that can result in great losses. In a word, a combination of measures should be implemented to prevent and battle against this kind of hideous vice, or we will remain troubled by the deception every now and then.

解析     本题讨论的是电信诈骗这个棘手的问题。选段中首先提到电信诈骗给人们造成的损失,其次引用权威人士的话分析了电信诈骗能够得逞的主要原因,即个人信息的泄漏。最后提到官方对此犯罪行为的态度。本题的写作重点在于:首先要概述选段中的要点,其次就如何抵制电信诈骗提出合理化建议,最后总结全文。
    开头部分首先由选段中的两个电信诈骗致死的事件引出话题;然后表明自己的观点,即个人和国家都应该采取措施来抵制这种猖獗的犯罪行为。
    中间部分首先指出电信诈骗屡屡得逞的最重要的原因,即个人信息的泄露,接着建议要重拳出击解决个人信息泄露的问题,然后从四个方面具体讲述如何达到这个目标。措施中虽包括了提高个人防范意识,但更多的是呼吁国家采取措施。
    结尾部分倡导积极预防和打击电信犯罪,并指出如果不及时打击,我们将尝到恶果。
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