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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled Helping a Sick Passerby following the outline gi

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled Helping a Sick Passerby following the outline gi

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled Helping a Sick Passerby following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1．简单叙述遇到一位路人生病的情况
    2．其他人是怎样帮助他／她的
    3．这件事给你的感受
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答案 Helping a Sick Passerby Yesterday when I was on my way to the supermarket, suddenly a girl walking slowly in front of me fell to the ground. Immediately I ran to the girl to see what happened to her. The girl fainted and sweated heavily. At the same time, several pedestrians came up, one of whom told us that he was a doctor and asked us to help him move the girl to the shade of a tree. The girl was thought to have come down with heatstroke. Someone called an ambulance. We waited there for the girl to regain consciousness. At last, the ambulance arrived, but the girl was still in the state of unconsciousness. As soon as the girl was carried in the ambulance, it roared off. What happened moved me deeply. Everyone will encounter ups and downs in his life. Then he may need others’ care and help. If we are willing to help each other, the world will be more harmonious.
解析     第一段交代人物、事件发生的时间和地点。第一句中walking slowly in front of me为现在分词短语作定语，修饰主语a girl，这样的安排使句式更加紧凑。
    第二段以事件发生的时间为主线叙述人们对生病女孩的照顾。其中第三句是带有非限制性定语从句的长句，使句式既多样化又紧凑。
    第三段是由此事件引发的感想。
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