Write a composition on the topic: Decoration at Home on the following instruction (given in Chinese): 1. 几年前没有多少人会想到装修自己的房子,

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问题     Write a composition on the topic: Decoration at Home on the following instruction (given in Chinese):
    1. 几年前没有多少人会想到装修自己的房子,为什么?
    2. 如今情况却大不相同了,又为什么?
    3. 陈述你对装修利弊的看法。
    You should write about 160-200 words neatly.

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答案 Decoration at Home Many years ago, not many people would have dreamed of decorating their houses. In those days, houses were the property of the state, people who lived in the house had no right to do decorations of any kind. In addition, people were very hard up. They could hardly keep their living. There were no professional painters and decorators to provide people with this kind of services. Today, however, it is quite a different stool Houses are no longer the property of the state. Instead,, they belong to the people who live in them. So people can make decorations of any kind at their will. With the development of the economy, people are now much better off; they don’t have to worry about how to maintain their lives. What is more, there appears a new industry to produce decoration materials of every description and there are a lot of building firms willing to do this kind of work. As a coin has two sides, house decoration also has its advantages and disadvantages. A well decorated house can make people feel more comfortable and more relaxed. Since people almost spend half of their life-time at home, it is absolutely necessary to make the house beautiful and comfortable. But some people make too much change in the house, as a result, the structure of the house is weakened, and a potential danger exists.

解析     这是一篇提纲式作文。提纲中明确提出了文章应谈论的主旨,因此,本文可直接按提纲的要求分三段进行写作,并且,前两个汉语提示均可分别用来作为各段的主题句。在进行文章各段的展开时,应讲清理由,层次要清晰。在第一段,我们可以直接点出主题:Many years ago,not many people would have dreamed of decorating their houses.然后谈原因。一是因为"In those days,houses were the property of the state,people who lived in the house had no right to do decorations of any kind".二是因为"people were very hard up. They could hardly keep their living.There were no professional painters and decorators to provide people with this kind of services".二者之间用"In addition"进行连接。接下来进行第二个主题句"Today,however,it is quite a different story".的展开。也分别讲清原因:1.Houses are no longer the property of the state.2.With the development of the economy,people are now much better off.3.There appears a new industry to produce decoration materials of every description and there are a lot of building firms willing to do this kind of work.并注意各句之间的连接词。最后一段谈作者自己的观点:装修有利也有弊。有利的是人们装修好后住起来更随心、更方便;不利的是由于装修对房子结构改动过大,带来一些安全隐患。
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