We are now living in a society of severe competition. Students need to compete for better school; companies compete for better p

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问题     We are now living in a society of severe competition. Students need to compete for better school; companies compete for better products and more customers. Many people neglect the role of cooperation. What do you think of the relationship between competition and cooperation?
    Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
COMPETITION AND COOPERATION
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 [1]It is often believed that competition and cooperation are in opposition to each other. [2]We are now living in a society of severe competition. Students need to compete for better schools; companies have to compete for better products and more customers. [3]And there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so on. Cooperation is often neglected by many people. [4]Here I would like to say that both competition and cooperation play an important role in social progress. [5] Competition is the impetus of the constant development of the human society. The pressure of competition can force people to try their best and give people a sense of the pursuit of excellence. Without competition people would be satisfied with their present condition and society would not advance. [6]A strong desire to succeed and do better than others inspires ns to work harder. [7]However, we also need to know the importance of cooperating with others. It’s unimaginable for an individual to live without society. In many cases,people need to cooperate with each other to overcome difficulties. Mere competition may lead to failure. [8]To succeed in life, we must learn that both competition and cooperation are indispensable. [9]Competition will make us always be active to create while cooperation gives us the possibility of working together to overcome obstacles.

解析  [1]用It is often believed that引出话题。
[2]severe competition意为“激烈的竞争”。competition前可以用不同的词修饰,见下面句型变换。
[4]用both... and... 指出强调竞争与合作都很重要。
[5]impetus意为“动力”,是亮点词汇。
[6]a strong desire to(do)和inspire sb. to do sth. 是语言亮点。
[7]用However笔锋一转,引出合作的重要性。
[9]while引导比较状语从句。结论:竞争和合作在迈向成功的路上同样重要。
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