2. 外语
  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Safety of Food. You should write at least 150 word

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Safety of Food. You should write at least 150 word

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Safety of Food. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1．目前食品安全的状况
2．产生这些食品质量问题的原因
3．我们应该怎么做
                        The Safety of Food
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答案 The Safety of Food Food safety has become a rising concern among Chinese citizens after a series of food contamination accidents occurred across the country in recent years. In 2006, the country’s food safety watchdog found that several companies were producing red-yolk eggs contaminated with dangerous red Sudan dyes. Even international fast food KFC was accused of adding cancer-causing Sudan-1 to its roast chicken wings. The most notorious case involved the recent tainted milk powder incident that has caused kidney stone in tens of thousands of infants. Food safety incidents happened so frequently mainly because of the food producer. In order to sell more products and make more profits, some food producers take the risk of breaking the law and may deliberately add various dangerous chemicals to make their food look or taste better. From my point of view, to guarantee the food safety, firstly we should improve the supervision mechanism. Secondly, we should severely punish the criminals and all those responsible. In this way, our food will conform to the standard and thus become safer and safer.
解析     本次写作试题要求对“食品安全”问题展开讨论。要求考生先描述食品安全的现状，然后分析产生这些食品问题的原因，最后就我们应该怎么做进行阐述。写作可以按照试卷上给出的汉语提纲展开。文章首段应指出食品安全问题已经越来越多地受到中国居民关注。可以运用…has become a rising concern among…的句式来表示“……已经成为(关注的焦点)”，类似的句式还有more and more people pay attention to…“越来越多的人在关注……”，还可以运用the most notorious case…来举例说明。文章第二段应该对产生食品安全的原因加以分析。很多生产者为了牟取暴利不惜违反法律将一些化学物品添加到食品里。用because of…来表示原因，还可以用the reason of…。用in order to表示为了达到……目的所采取的做法，相类似的用法还有so as to…，in order that…。提出对策和建议时可用firstly…secondly…finally／at last…或first of all…then…the last but not the least等表达方式，以体现文章条理清晰。
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