For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition describing how you help a boy who fall into a lake by acc

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition describing how you help a boy who fall into a lake by accident. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below.
    假如你“五一”期间去公园游玩,遇到一个小男孩不慎掉人公园的人工湖里。湖水较深,小男孩挣扎求救,会游泳的你奋不顾身地跳人湖里将他救起。在众人的帮助下,两人顺利地上了岸。你的行为赢得了众人的赞扬。请写一篇文章描述此事件。

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答案 Be Ready to Help Others During the Labor Day holiday, I went on an outing to the park. When I wandered around a lake, I saw a boy aged 7 or 8 falling into the lake by accident. "Help! Help... " I heard him crying and saw him struggling in the deep water. Immediately, I jumped into the water and struck out for the drowning boy. Though the water was cold, I had no time to think about it. Finally, I reached the boy and took him to the nearest bank. People on the bank caught hold of us and lifted us up. Fortunately, the boy was still conscious and kept crying. My courageous deed won people’s admiration. I smiled and left. I got wet all over, but I really think I did the right thing. I believe when we give a hand to people in trouble, the world will be full of love.

解析     文章第一段交待事情发生的时间、地点和起因。
    第二段具体描述事情发生的过程:“我”跳入冰冷的湖水中,将落水的小男孩带到岸边,在众人的帮助下,两人都顺利地上了岸。
    第三段说明“我”的行为赢得了众人的赞扬,并表达对见义勇为行为的看法:我们都帮助有困难的人,世界就会充满爱。
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