Comparison has been a part of life for many people. Males compare their careers, accomplishments and what they have, while femal

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问题 Comparison has been a part of life for many people. Males compare their careers, accomplishments and what they have, while females compare brand clothes and families. What do you think?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the topic:
                    Is It Wise to Compare Ourselves with Others?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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答案 Is It Wise to Compare Ourselves with Others? Nowadays comparison has been a part of life for many people. Some people are strongly against this practice. They believe that comparing with others brings about more pressure. But I don’t think so and I insist that it is wise to compare ourselves with others. I have several reasons to support my view. To start with, others are mirrors through which we can see our own merits as well as demerits and improve ourselves accordingly. As Confucius said, “Among any three people walking, I will find something to learn for sure. Their good qualities are to be followed, and their shortcomings are to be avoided”. In addition, we know clearly where we stand and who we are by comparison. For example, every time we take exams, we feel it necessary to be told where we rank to see if we have made progress or been left behind. Finally, comparing ourselves with people who are better than us can motivate us to work harder and express our full range of potential. From the foregoing, we can safely draw a conclusion that it is advisable to compare ourselves with others because we can introspect ourselves and move forward in the course of comparison.

解析 第一段描述背景引出我的观点:与他人比较是明智之举。
第二段列举三个原因来支持论点:他人是自己的一面镜子,通过比较,择其善者而从之,择其不善者而改之;有比较才能知道自己的处境;与比我们出色的人作对比可以激励我们奋发图强。
第三段总结上述讨论,重申与他人比较是可取的。
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