For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words fol

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.有人认为收入差距的存在是合理的
    2.有人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的
    3.收入差距对社会的影响
                      On Income Gap

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答案 On Income Gap Nowadays, there has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap. Some people hold that the gap is reasonable because it reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay. On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is another point to back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work. As everything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, some negative consequences will come out. Therefore, our government should make some policies to prevent and get rid of them.

解析     这篇作文主要讨论收入差距是否合理以及对社会造成的影响。在布局上、全文可以分成三个段落进行写作,而且前两个段落在内容上应该进行对比。
    第一段从正面论述收入存在差距的合理性及理由。
    第二段从反面论述收入存在差距的不合理性及理由。
    第三段论述收入差距对社会造成的影响。
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