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  3. You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Commercialism at Holiday Time". You should base your composition on

You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Commercialism at Holiday Time". You should base your composition on

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问题 You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Commercialism at Holiday Time". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
(1)对于我们，假日有了更多的经济意义。
(2)假日经济带来的好处。
(3)结论。
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答案 Title: Commercialism at Holiday Time What do holidays mean to you? Exciting trips? Enjoyable shopping experiences? Happy get-togethers? Or just a retreat from the routine harassment? Yes. That’s what holidays mean to almost all average people. But for the society, holidays may carry more economic meanings. After each week-long holidays, there will be statistics reporting considerable profits from tourist industry and other service sectors, like airways, railroad service, catering service and department stores. Indeed, the commercial use of holiday benefits the nation’s economy and lift people’s spirits. Commerce at holiday time enriches the economy. Holidays encourage the ongoing moving of people and money as well, which greatly boosts the prosperity of economy. When people go traveling, or spend money on gifts and holiday products, jobs are created in various sectors of the economy: manufacturing, distribution, advertising, and retailing. In addition to economic benefits, commercial activity enhances the spirit of holidays. People feel more cheerful at holiday time. Everyone has a fancy program for his or her holiday. Advertising related to holidays further amplifies the atmosphere of festivity. Exchanging gifts and courtesy visits helps people stay in touch with each other and express their feelings. To conclude, commercialism at holiday time is advantageous for both the individuals and the nation. It gives people a chance for relaxation and improved quality of life and gives the nation a chance for stimulated economy.
解析     本文语言流畅、层次分明，每一段都扣住提纲中的关键词展开深入的论述。段与段之间通过承上启下的句子、关联词的运用，自然过渡和衔接，增强了文章的层次感，更提高了语言的表现力。另外，作者用词面宽，准确到位，增强了文章的可读性。最突出的是，本文作者匠心独具，开篇扣住提纲要点——假日的商业化趋势，探讨假日的不同含义，深入地阐释假日经济的概念。首段最后一句作为全段的总结为下文埋下伏笔(Indeed，the commercial use of holiday benefitsthe nation’s economy and lift people’s spirits．)。文章的第二段承接第一段中提出的两个要点(benefit the nation’s economy和lift people’s spirits)，进一步阐述假日经济带来的好处。结尾段总结全文，重申主题，使文章内容统一而充实。
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