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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Plastic Surgery and Work following the outline given b

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Plastic Surgery and Work following the outline given b

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Plastic Surgery and Work following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1．现在很多女大学生想通过整容变得更漂亮，以便于找工作
    2．这样做的危害及影响
    3．我的观点
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答案 Plastic Surgery and Work Recent years have seen the rapid development and great popularity of plastic surgery in China. Especially some young girls choose to take plastic surgery, in hopes that a more attractive appearance will help them to find a good job. The benefits of plastic surgery are reported to be fantastic. After undergoing plastic surgery, some people find themselves physically younger, thinner and prettier, while others discover that they are more confident psychologically than before. However, despite the dramatic improvement in technology, risks and dangers of plastic surgery still exist. Firstly unsatisfactory aesthetic results may be disappointing or even devastating for some patients. Besides, some operations may result in infection, which can be dangerous and likely to ruin a cosmetic procedure. Worse yet’ the unluckiest may be left with persistent pain, or even nerve damage. From my perspective, it is not advisable for people to take plastic surgery. On the one hand, no cosmetic surgery is totally risk-free. On the other hand, a decent job has little to do with one’s appearance. What’s more, the surgery will be a high cost for the fresh graduates. In a word, there is no need for the young to suffer from the pain and the economic burden of plastic surgery.
解析     第一段指出目前很多人尤其是女大学生想通过整容变得更漂亮，以便找一份好工作。段中最后一句用while表明据说整容后不管是在身体上还是精神上都能使人受益很大。
    第二段重点论述了美容整形的危害和风险。有的手术不一定能达到预想的效果，有人会感染其他疾病，甚至会留下永久的伤痛。该段用Firstly，Besides，Worse yet清楚地引出了整形手术可能存在的风险。
    第三段阐述自己的观点，即认为美容整形是不可取的，长相只是外表，不会和未来的工作挂钩，女大学生们没必要为此遭受身体和经济上的双重负担。该段多用简单句，但表达清楚，用法新颖，如no cosmetic surgery is totally risk-free。
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