For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eye-witness account of a fire accident following the outline given below.

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eye-witness account of a fire accident following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.火灾发生的时间和地点
    2.你所见到的火灾情况
    3.你对火灾原因的分析

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答案 A Fire Accident At about 7:30 in the morning of APril 20th on my way toscho°l, I witnessed a fire accident. That morning I went to school by bike as usual, suddenly I was startled to hear people screaming loudly "Fire! Fire!" I saw a shoP not far away was on fire. I rushed to the spot and more and more people gathered there. There was no extinguisher, so we found every possible tool to carry water to put out the fire. At the same time, someone called 119. Soon the fire fighters arrived. With fire-extinguishing equipments, they quickly put out the fire. In my view, there are two possible reasons for the fire accident. The first reason might be that the shop stored something inflammable and somebody threw a burning cigarette butt at random. The second reason might be that the shopkeeper wanted to save money by keeping using some household appliances for too long, which caused the disaster. No matter what the real cause is, life is the most precious.

解析     第一段简要交代目击火灾的时间和地点。
    第二段按照时间顺序描述了火灾的情况。注意时态的正确使用。
    第三段从两个方面分析了引发火灾的原因。第一,商店内有易燃物,有人随意扔烟头导致火灾;第二,店主所使用的电器老化导致火灾。本段的整体框架借鉴了议论文列举理由的模式。
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