For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Living Expenditure of College Students. You should write a

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Living Expenditure of College Students.  You should write at least 120 words following the out line given below in Chinese:
    1. 大学生的生活费用安排发生变化;
    2. 产生这些变化的原因是什么;
    3. 你的看法。

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答案 Living Expenditure of College Students Studying the table carefully, we can see that in the past sixteen years, there have been great changes in students’ living expenditure. Expense on food is on the decline from 24.5% to 23.7% of all. However, the money spent on clothes, entertainments, transportation and communication is on the rise. The most important reason of this phenomenon is probably the change of students’ living circumstances. In the first years of 1990’ s, many students had not much money to spend and most of them lived a simple life on campus. But nowadays life on campus is different and it is more colorful than before. Students have more chances to enjoy life, so they pay more attention to entertainments, clothes, transportation and communication. In a word, life on campus is changing. Students cast their attention upon various aspects of life and they can live a more pleasant life in the future.

解析     作文首先根据图表提供的信息,介绍了学生生活费用安排的变化,即吃饭费用占的比例少了,而其他方面如衣服、交通、通讯、娱乐方面的消费所占比例增加了。第二段推断出现这种现象的主要原因是学生生活环境发生了变化,与过去的十几年相比,现在的学生生活更加丰富多彩,学生有更多的机会来享受生活。最后作者认为学生的生活将会更加多姿多彩。
    对于这样一个图表题目,本文使用了一些典型语言来体现该类作文的特点,如“Studying the table carefully,we call see that in the past sixteen years,there have been great changes in students’living expenditure.”“Expense on food is on the decline from 24.5% to 23.7% of all.”等等。
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